Thanks for the first reply.
The latter part of your poem,
a nexus of ...to the end is 'a tautology of abstructive concept'. You can use more 'concrete object' to connote the eternity of soul, etc. In poem you mustn't say directly what you want to say. Instead you have to let other object talk what you intended to have implied.
Posted by mercedo on Friday, October 27, 2006 at 11:03 PM [Reply to this]
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